I would like the essay to start with a hook about skiing in the winter and choos

I would like the essay to start with a hook about skiing in the winter and choos

I would like the essay to start with a hook about skiing in the winter and choosing a challenging slope similar to choosing my path. (Make sure you don’t link choosing the path on the slope like choosing a path in life that is so cliche.) In the introduction make sure you use all 5 sense in explaining how it feels being on the slopes smell, hear, see, and even taste the air. When I’m on the top of the slope the highest point and i look down my mind is clear here i escape the echo chambers of my mind.
Make the essay with a personal touch like talking in first point of view. Write about encountering diverse view points, and how they challenge preconceived notion and looking at life from a different point of view brining in why i choose entrepreneurship but not making the whole essay about it.
Also emphasize on the importance of different alternative perspectives to escape intellectual stagnation. The essay should also highlight the benefits of fostering open mindedness and boarder world view through this process.
Make sure you end the essay with how it started to make sure its all tied together.