make sure thesis statement in paper is very clear
take out anything in paper that isn’t about just lsd and art to make the thesis clearer and make sure all sources discussed and all paragraphs relate back to the thesis
work on organization and reorder paragraphs if need be
use and add primary sources such as pieces of artwork from artists in the 60s who took lsd,
and get rid of sources used that are not reliable secondary or primary sources
make sure thesis statement in paper is very clear take out anything in paper tha
